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Re: God's Fireman
As promised! Eek- it's so long! I'll go back where I left off. Then he asked me to try to control the fire and I could. My training went half ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Exile: Chapter Three
Oooh, chapter three is up! Hey, you have less and less errors every time! Critique: Heh, that was the moment when I decided to write this book, despite it taking ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Influence Chapter 1
I think it would be nice if you added description. I believe when you reviewed my piece, you told me to show not tell. You need to do the same. ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Exile: Chapter 2
Your beginning is fine. It's just a little bland. Like I said, describe the laughter more. How does your character laugh? Why is he laughing? Why does the horse approve ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1.0 of My Werewolf Story Re-Write
Why isn't he hunted in human form if he's got some unusual features like blood-red eyes and an angry scar around his neck? And a new one: Do werewolves age ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: The Classics and Philosophy thread
I hate Dickens as well. His style is much to dense and flowery. The narrative is very dry. I read Jonathan Swift and I found him more modern! (he's from ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Prologue of my story
The funny things is, I have posted chapter one, but people only critique this! XD Everyone tells me to post more... I did, but you won't read it. :) Anyway, ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: ~Addicting Poison - chapter 1~
Ok, second attempt at writing a review! as I dropped my hand like skin to a branding iron Skin drops of branding irons? I understand what you're trying to say, ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: ~Addicting Poison - chapter 1~
Ok, second attempt at writing a review! as I dropped my hand like skin to a branding iron Skin drops of branding irons? I understand what you're trying to say, ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: ~Addicting Poison - chapter 1~
oh my god! I wrote this huge review and it was erased! I swear I'll finish it later. God! This sucks.
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: ~Addicting Poison - chapter 1~
All right, thanks :) Sorry, if I was rude before, but it was really bothering me lol No time to mess around, I thought as I dropped my hand like ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: ~Addicting Poison - chapter 1~
All right, thanks :) Sorry, if I was rude before, but it was really bothering me lol No time to mess around, I thought as I dropped my hand like ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
I love the Gemma Doyle Trilogy ^^.
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Dirty Joke
Um, ha ha? It's not all that funny... It took like ten seconds to understand. Maybe you have to be a guy... Oh well :)
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Seriously. It was like "Maximum Ride- A Side Adventure".
Dec 16, 2008